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Dart to the heart

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Shot to the heart
Tear on the cheek
You hit me with your dart
Now I'm weak
So take your best shot
I can't take much more
So just let me rot
On your own front door
Something small I made...I usually don't do rhyming, so here's a change...
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Wow, that was really good! It wasn't too long, yet it still said so much. It also leaves room for imagination. Like what happened or exactly what you meant with the last line. This is pretty good, but you decide if it goes anywhere from here or not......